Justyna
by pawel_m_plus on November 20, 2007
in students
At the beginning I’d like to say that the person which I will describe is in my imagination. I want to describe my ideal woman. I’ll meet her in a library or somewhere else. Her name is Justyna and she’ll be a nurse in hospital in Białystok. The best thing about her ids that when we will be walking through the city, everybody will be jealous of us.
She’ll shorter than me, so when she’ll be wearing high heels she won’t be taller than me, because it looks rather silly if a girl has to bend down to kiss her boyfriend. In her early twenties she’ll have long, wavy, dark hair, just as I like. Because of her long legs she’ll look very sexy while wearing short skirts. Justyna will wear all types of clothes because for me she will look sexy in everything.
What I will particularly love about her is that she’ll know how to dance, because I like dancing, and she’ll tell me things that I really want to hear, because I like when girl is talking about me. Patient and understanding will be her best features. What is more, great and intelligent sense of humor and a lack of evening headaches will be her features that I’ll truly love.
As I said before, Justyna is my ideal woman and, undoubtedly, she’ll have a big influence on my personality. Maybe knowing her will make me more responsible and, perhaps, I will grow up mentally thanks to her. With her I will learn how to be more confident and I will experience things that I have never dreamt of. There aren’t many people that I love but she’ll be my number one.
This is my describtion of a person. I find it dificult to check if my writing has some mistake so I’d be grateful if you would correct them, if there are any. And I’ll try to write that essay about nationality but I won’t promise anything :P because I’m a bit tired today and I don’t think that I will have much time tomorrow (of course I will try:).
There are only few mistakes. Some of them are:
1. “the person WHO I will describe”
2. “she’ll be a nurse in A hospital”
3. “The best thing about her IS” (a spelling mistake)
3. “She’ll BE shorter than me” (you must have omitted the word by mistake)
And the description is a bit too long (around 280 words). Otherwise it’s really good. Congratulations. And I hope you will meet your Justyna :) soon.